Briefcase
She entered in the room;
Slammed the briefcase;
Sat on the bed;
And meanwhile was checking options
For another place;
(After two hours)
She entered in the room;
Slammed the briefcase;
Sat on the bed;
and meanwhile was checking options
For another place;
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