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Brief Encounter

brief encounter

a man invisible
but for his wit
landed on my world 
lightly it seemed 
until he left

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/24/2017 6:31:00 PM
Beautifully subtle. Very very charming. A fave with me. Truth be told, I was a fanatic of Cyrano de Bergerac so that does explain my attraction to your lovely poem. Thank you xx
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PATRICIA CRESSWELL
Date: 10/24/2017 6:58:00 PM
Thank you for reading it so gently.
Date: 10/24/2017 2:31:00 PM
Beautifully poignant in a brief and compact way...this I really do like, Patricia -- marvelous bit of poetry! :) john
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john fleming
Date: 10/24/2017 8:00:00 PM
Listening is a lost art... :)
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PATRICIA CRESSWELL
Date: 10/24/2017 6:16:00 PM
I miss him we used to really talk and he really listened.
Date: 10/24/2017 12:11:00 PM
So potent in so few words Patricia, a most impactful write. fave. Love and hugs your way :) xomo!
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PATRICIA CRESSWELL
Date: 10/24/2017 6:15:00 PM
Well either you make a long story long or you go for short and sweet. He was good man but he died too soon. Thanks.
Date: 10/24/2017 5:35:00 AM
Very brief indeed... do you think he will come back?
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PATRICIA CRESSWELL
Date: 10/24/2017 9:46:00 AM
No he will not be back. He died but we have a date for the other side.