Brief Encounter

brief encounter a man invisible but for his wit landed on my world lightly it seemed until he left

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/24/2017 6:31:00 PM

Beautifully subtle. Very very charming. A fave with me. Truth be told, I was a fanatic of Cyrano de Bergerac so that does explain my attraction to your lovely poem. Thank you xx

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/24/2017 6:58:00 PM

Thank you for reading it so gently.

John Fleming

Date: 10/24/2017 2:31:00 PM

Beautifully poignant in a brief and compact way...this I really do like, Patricia -- marvelous bit of poetry! :) john

John Fleming
Date: 10/24/2017 8:00:00 PM

Listening is a lost art... :)

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/24/2017 6:16:00 PM

I miss him we used to really talk and he really listened.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/24/2017 12:11:00 PM

So potent in so few words Patricia, a most impactful write. fave. Love and hugs your way :) xomo!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/24/2017 6:15:00 PM

Well either you make a long story long or you go for short and sweet. He was good man but he died too soon. Thanks.

Silent One

Date: 10/24/2017 5:35:00 AM

Very brief indeed... do you think he will come back?

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/24/2017 9:46:00 AM

No he will not be back. He died but we have a date for the other side.