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Bridging the Ego Abyss

Born free and playful, our soul was complete
Reaching out to one and all, joy replete 
Illumined was our soul, divine entwined
Dispersing love, nothing to be divined
Giving rather than taking, was the norm
Immersed deep in a bliss magnetised storm
Neophyte humble, prayer on our lips
Grateful for each heartbeat that rapture grips

Then lower mind, cast upon us a spell 
Head-heart split, in fears we began to dwell
Ego spawned sorrow, spelt our heart’s death knell

Empty heart sought joy amidst illusions
God’s light veiled, unending our delusions 
Opaqued truth birthed mistaken conclusions

Acceptance dawns, we enter the abyss
Bowing down to conscience, erst fears dismiss
Yearning for God, replacing narrow views
Stillness dynamic, joy pulse that renews 
Surrender complete, filling heart with bliss

09-December-2021

(Acrostic Syllabic Rhyme)
Syllables: HMS
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1st stanza: aabbccdd, 2nd: eee, 3rd: fff, 4th: gghhg

''A'' Forms, New Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 4:25 PM
Seeker, congratulations on your First Place win in my "A" Forms Contest with your excellent Rhyming Acrostic poem ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/creative write. Love it. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Seeker Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, Paula! Greetings of the season!
Y. Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 8:51 AM
WoW! Seeker, You penned such a deep and well-written piece. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Seeker Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Thank you, Alexis! The credit goes to Constance for the contest prompt.
Alex Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:22 AM
Great Acrostic on Bridging the ego abyss. Beautiful! Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:51 AM
Happy you liked it, Chris!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 9:28 PM
Contrasts in this one! Congratulations on a great write!
Seeker Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:51 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Agustin Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 7:17 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this---and yes, for exposing "egoistic abyss" reality in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.
Seeker Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 8:18 PM
Thanks, Beata! :)
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