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Bridging the Ego Abyss

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Born free and playful, our soul was complete Reaching out to one and all, joy replete Illumined was our soul, divine entwined Dispersing love, nothing to be divined Giving rather than taking, was the norm Immersed deep in a bliss magnetised storm Neophyte humble, prayer on our lips Grateful for each heartbeat that rapture grips Then lower mind, cast upon us a spell Head-heart split, in fears we began to dwell Ego spawned sorrow, spelt our heart’s death knell Empty heart sought joy amidst illusions God’s light veiled, unending our delusions Opaqued truth birthed mistaken conclusions Acceptance dawns, we enter the abyss Bowing down to conscience, erst fears dismiss Yearning for God, replacing narrow views Stillness dynamic, joy pulse that renews Surrender complete, filling heart with bliss 09-December-2021 (Acrostic Syllabic Rhyme) Syllables: HMS Rhymezone check 1st stanza: aabbccdd, 2nd: eee, 3rd: fff, 4th: gghhg ''A'' Forms, New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 12/31/2021 4:25:00 PM
Seeker, congratulations on your First Place win in my "A" Forms Contest with your excellent Rhyming Acrostic poem ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Date: 12/24/2021 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/creative write. Love it. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/24/2021 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, Paula! Greetings of the season!
Date: 12/23/2021 8:51:00 AM
WoW! Seeker, You penned such a deep and well-written piece. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2021 6:54:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis! The credit goes to Constance for the contest prompt.
Date: 12/23/2021 4:22:00 AM
Great Acrostic on Bridging the ego abyss. Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/23/2021 4:51:00 AM
Happy you liked it, Chris!
Date: 12/22/2021 9:28:00 PM
Contrasts in this one! Congratulations on a great write!
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Date: 12/23/2021 4:51:00 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 12/22/2021 7:17:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this---and yes, for exposing "egoistic abyss" reality in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.
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Date: 12/22/2021 8:18:00 PM
Thanks, Beata! :)

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