Line Gauthier Poet Enclosed Rhyme

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Bridging Inspiration

I look up high and low outside my window
While the whole wide world seems fast asleep 
I think I hear sweet tears that angels weep
As breaks the far horizon with solar glow 

I wander closer to my window pane
Look out and latch on to serenity
Peacefully I ponder vast infinity
While forsaking all dull thoughts mundane

Dawn's majestic celestial pageantry
Casts vibrations and dimensions apart
Bridging from the depths within my heart
Unruffled silences that whisper harmony

In the wee hours that launch the crack of dawn
A peek at heaven propels my spirit free
To roam the vast expanse of universe carefree
And release the inspiration my dream spawns



AP: 2nd place 2020

Submitted on August 18, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 2, AUGUST 2019 - ENCLOSED RHYME sponsored by DEAR HEART  –  RANKED 2ND

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Sam Kauffman August 28, 2019 at 11:20 AM Line, congratulations on your winning poem. It is really quite lovely with imagery so striking that even a person, like me, who is allergic to morning can step into the beauty of the dawn. Line Gauthier August 28, 2019 at 12:51 PM Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Sam.

Constance La France August 23, 2019 at 10:26 AM Line, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge with your Enclosed Rhyme. I love dawn also and your poem is beautifully penned and love your photograph also ~ Line Gauthier August 23, 2019 at 2:22 PM Thanks for your kind comment and ranking. Always enjoy your contests, Constance.

Subimal Sinha-Roy August 23, 2019 at 7:02 AM Congratulations, Line on your win with the picturesque poem.

Eve Roper August 22, 2019 at 11:30 PM Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve

Sandra Adams August 22, 2019 at 8:08 PM my job allows me to watch the beauty in every sunrise...no two are ever exactly alike.... love this beautiful entry in the contest...congrats on your well deserving win :) hugs Line Gauthier August 22, 2019 at 8:39 PM Thank you, Sandra. Sunrise is definitely a magical time of day.

Connie Marcum Wong August 22, 2019 at 7:22 PM "Unruffled silences that whisper harmony" You have expressed this so beautifully Line. There is nothing quite like Dawn to inspire poetry. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving Silver medal! xxoo Line Gauthier August 22, 2019 at 8:39 PM Thank you very much, Connie.

Lindsay Laurie August 20, 2019 at 10:55 PM Hello Line … the dawn always seems to offer new hope with the freshness, bird song, and beauty of the sunrise - nicely written Line - Lindsay Line Gauthier August 20, 2019 at 10:57 PM Indeed. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Lindsay.

Timothy Mcguire August 19, 2019 at 9:58 PM Wonderful, A fav for me! Timothy Mcguire August 22, 2019 at 9:43 PM Nice Win! Line Gauthier August 19, 2019 at 10:10 PM Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Timothy.

Caren Krutsinger August 19, 2019 at 6:21 AM "Look out and latch on to serenity" - I do this and more often now than ever before. Beautiful poem for Constance's contest, Line. Line Gauthier August 19, 2019 at 10:11 AM Thanks, Caren.

Tom Cunningham August 19, 2019 at 4:32 AM When I was at work everyday was like your verse, so peaceful and for a time the whole world was mine. Seen so many sunrises I've lost count. Well written Line. Tom Line Gauthier August 19, 2019 at 10:12 AM Best time of the day! Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Tom.

Panagiota Romios August 18, 2019 at 8:52 PM Golly, what a peaceful sense this brings. Thank you Panagiota Line Gauthier August 18, 2019 at 11:05 PM Thanks for your most appreciated compliment, Panagiota.