Bridge of Sigh's-Deb's Contest

I can see it shining so brightly
So white against the Venetian skies
From which a last view is seen by some
As they kiss freedom goodbye

Just like my heart wavering on the brink
of happiness, pondering the yes and knows
The yes of wanting to float and not sink
The no of letting freedom go

It is nearly sunset the bells sound out as
the boatmen sing their songs
The sun is rapidly disappearing
they kiss and know they belong

Tradition is that a kiss at sunset 
Just as the sun goes down
Brings untold happiness
From that moment on




A local legend says that lovers will be granted eternal love and bliss if they kiss on a gondola at sunset under the Bridge of Sighs as the bells of St Mark's Campanile toll.[
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Lamoureux Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 8:27 AM
Good morning Seren.
Bunch Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 5:14 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful win with a wonderful poem.
Roberts Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 2:15 AM
Thank you wayland...seren
A  Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 10:52 PM
Seren ,a beautiful winning poem. Enjoyed reading every crossing bridge win. Hugs ~ SKAT ~
Roberts Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 2:15 AM
Thank you Skat ...Seren
Lamoureux Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 8:27 AM
I love your kissing bridge, congrats.
Roberts Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 2:16 AM
Hi Richard thank you ...Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 7:06 AM
Hi sass, love this one, Congratulations on another win love xx
Roberts Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 2:14 AM
Thank you Mandy, lovely to see you back again ...Seren
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:26 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest of Deb, Seren
Roberts Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Ram ........Seren
Posey Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 8:54 PM
I take your word that this is a legend... 'cause if it's not....It should be.... Great win..... Jake
Roberts Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:32 PM
Jake would I lie to you? You can google it if you want verification. Thanks for stopping by...Seren
A   Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 6:46 PM
SEREN, Congratulations on your Crossing That Bridge win.... always & forever :) LINDA
Roberts Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:33 PM
Thanks Linda ....Seren
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 11:10 AM
as splendid as it gets, seren... special cheers on your win..:) huggs
Sirak Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 8:38 AM
Beautiful and romantic. Sigh.......
Roberts Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 2:22 AM
Hi Monterey thank u
Sivey Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:32 PM
This is wonderful and a sure winner to me my friend! I truly loved reading this tremendous write this evening! What a brilliant piece you have written here, a simply beautiful poem, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:41 PM
Oh my Russell, hope it gets picked out we will see...Seren
A  Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 4:38 PM
Love your poem. Good luck in the contest.....SKAT
Roberts Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:42 PM
Hello SKAT thx for stopping by....Seren
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