Sara Kendrick Poet Verse

Bride's Net Veil

The bride's long net veil floats across
Hill and dale, in gentle
Yet excited whispy array
Very temperamental

Angel wings decorate morn's sky 
For the lovely cool bride
Sun's pink hues color choice plus blue
Beautiful scene as bride glides 

Just a morn out on the porch

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Jack Horne October 7, 2012 at 12:57 PM lovely indeed, Sara

Phyllis Babcock October 6, 2012 at 10:22 PM Nicely done on this poem Sara. Hope you are feeling better and things are back to normal for you. Just sit on that porch and join me for a coffee tomorrow morning. Will be thinking of you. love phyl

Vesna Kovrlija October 6, 2012 at 7:00 PM Beautiful, subtle, simply perfect!

John Loving Iii October 6, 2012 at 1:13 PM Picture perfect for a wedding

Richard Palmer October 6, 2012 at 7:09 AM great way to start my day,thanks much Sara,for this morning gem

Joe Maverick October 6, 2012 at 12:34 AM What a serene morning you introduce me to with this write Sarah. I shall think on its peaceful tones today.."

Poet Destroyer A October 5, 2012 at 9:29 PM Sara, your poem is beautiful, the canvas is painted with a scene, that excites.. , enjoyed stopping by;-) Good night~ LINDA

Sandy Ivy D October 5, 2012 at 4:41 PM nice Sandy

Tim Ryerson October 5, 2012 at 3:09 PM Love the way you created these beautiful images just from sitting out on the porch...Wonderful, Sara - Tim

Robert Pettit October 5, 2012 at 2:57 PM I agree with everything Anne Lise has written just below.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2012 at 1:51 PM - Love it, beautifully written Sara. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey October 5, 2012 at 12:50 PM I too hope you are doing better my friend! This write shines very brightly and beautifully! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic poem this afternoon! What a delightful write full of timeless emotion, a beautiful scene! This is a pleasantly devoted piece Sara, fabulously put together, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2012 at 12:47 PM wow, what a beautiful metaphor you have created. Awesome, Sara.

Nette Onclaud October 5, 2012 at 9:44 AM how are you, sara?.. hope you have completely recovered after that energency moment... love this lilting piece; so smooth... and delicately scribed!..:) huggs

Jonas L. Rozario October 5, 2012 at 9:41 AM beautiful verse...enjoyed!!!