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Bride of Satan

The bride of Satan dressed in white; To be quite frank, she looks a fright - But Satan says she looks all ‘rite’. For Joann’s Wedding contest

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Date: 8/31/2012 12:21:00 PM
reminds me of tim burton's movie, ' corpse bride'... but your stunning, humorous piece knocked me off my chair, jack... and satan said, 'alright?"... so funny!.. winning hugggs!..:)
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Date: 8/30/2012 4:42:00 PM
The title itself scared me...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner in that it will probably be very unique...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2012 3:25:00 PM
Very funny/witty! Like! Terry
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Date: 8/30/2012 2:54:00 PM
Jack, does this word rite have a slang meaning or something? i am thinking there is a joke in there!
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Date: 8/30/2012 1:45:00 PM
Ha! What a fabulous write my friend! I love this splendid poem Jack! You've done magnificently with this piece, Great Work!!
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