Bride of Satan

The bride of Satan dressed in white;
To be quite frank, she looks a fright -
But Satan says she looks all ‘rite’.

For Joann’s Wedding contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Onclaud Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 12:21 PM
reminds me of tim burton's movie, ' corpse bride'... but your stunning, humorous piece knocked me off my chair, jack... and satan said, 'alright?"... so funny!.. winning hugggs!..:)
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 4:42 PM
The title itself scared me...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner in that it will probably be very unique...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
O'Leary Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 3:25 PM
Very funny/witty! Like! Terry
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 2:54 PM
Jack, does this word rite have a slang meaning or something? i am thinking there is a joke in there!
Sivey Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Ha! What a fabulous write my friend! I love this splendid poem Jack! You've done magnificently with this piece, Great Work!!
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