Sara Kendrick Poet Triolet

Briar

Briar that climbs the Willow Tree
Higher it grows every summer
It captures my imagination see
Briar that climbs the Willow Tree
Somehow ruins my flight to fantasy
Disrupts thoughts and is a sandspur
Briar that climbs the Willow Tree
Higher it grows every summer  

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Isaiah Zerbst February 9, 2013 at 8:29 AM An interesting topic for your poem that works well. I can tell that you enjoy nature. The combination here between the willow tree and the briar is excellent.

Harry Horsman February 9, 2013 at 8:01 AM this is really good Sara,,,

Kash Poet February 9, 2013 at 5:58 AM Very good approach by you here Sara.Love this poem.Best wishes to you.

Jancarl Campi February 9, 2013 at 5:17 AM This is an interesting poem. An enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest! Jancarl

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2013 at 3:44 PM I love triolets and you did well with this one.