Brian's Sonnet

Natural beauty,  Spewell Bluff
The Flint River's tall, green, pine woods
and smooth, cool, grey, flat, river rocks
Make a shady get away day
Become family fun, skipping
Rocks across the water for sport.
Nature trails lead up, up a step
Hill for the strong of leg and heart.
Fishing or swimming is a choice;
Volley ball and canoing across

The grey shallow water holds fun
at the Spewell Bluff State Park;
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 22, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Sounds like a fun place to go for some really great fun... good luck in Brian's contest... my entry is "Pearl in the Oyster" about New Jersey of course..luv.. Linda-Marie
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April 22, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Sounds a wonderful place Doris..lovely imagery portrayed...good luck in the contest and many thanks for your kind comments...Have a good day ...Allie
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April 21, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Sounds like a very nice, peaceful spot, Doris. Do you canoe? We're always looking for new places to explore by canoe. Love, Carolyn
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