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Brewing Darkness

Beguiling placidity of luring hiss Upon the oblivion of a venomous kiss Like the grasping toxin of a viper’s sting Amidst a violet lullaby the night-sky would sing, Sable sky, O reflection of debility Clutching the soul into peaceful futility With your visage so pallid, and O so white Shining above clouds ashen as the night, Brewing darkness, dwelling with might Tearing the sun as your opaqueness ignites Approaching you emerge with eternal power All orbs fade as dreams devour…

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Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 5/9/2009 7:56:00 AM

this was so powerful, and beautiful. thanks for the comment! <3 madison

John Heck

Date: 11/30/2008 4:27:00 AM

Dear Farah - Beautiful poetry as always! Congratulations on your 3 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/1/2008 4:42:00 PM

Farah outstanding work all three to the finals - Congratulations - God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2008 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Farah. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 10/27/2008 3:54:00 PM

Hi Farah Congrats on all your amazing poems making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!!! Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/27/2008 5:35:00 AM

Warmest congrats dear Farah on your 3 poems making the first round! Good luck! Love, Shar

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 10/26/2008 5:27:00 PM

Dear Farah, Congratulations on your poem with two others titled War and Allegiance and Thunder Aloud making the first round of the International Poetry Competition held on Sept. 1, 2008. The win is well deserved. Your poems are really remarkable. Well done! -Mohammad

Sue Mason

Date: 10/26/2008 4:25:00 PM

Great visuals with this one, farrah and congratulations on having THREE (!!)of your writes included in the semi-finals of the PoetrySoup contest !! Good luck!

Deneen White

Date: 8/26/2008 4:00:00 PM

hi Ms. young one, congrats on being featured, take care D-nyce

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/25/2008 1:55:00 PM

Congratulations dear Farah on this amazing poem being featured! Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/25/2008 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations Young One, on "Brewing Darkness" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

Brian Strand

Date: 8/25/2008 12:52:00 AM

Farah,Congrats on your feature this week.Rgds Brian

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/24/2008 7:20:00 PM

Farah an amazing poem - You know I find it funny that I have read your work as long as i have and just now had it dawn on me where you are from - I have always wanted to visit that region from the bible stories as a child - Congrats on the feature

James Foulk

Date: 8/9/2008 5:35:00 PM

a great poem, warm, and touching, enjoyed reading it, thank you for reading my seeds hiding and for your comment