Farah Chamma Poet Couplet

Brewing Darkness

Beguiling placidity of luring hiss
Upon the oblivion of a venomous kiss

Like the grasping toxin of a viper’s sting
Amidst a violet lullaby the night-sky would sing,

Sable sky, O reflection of debility
Clutching the soul into peaceful futility

With your visage so pallid, and O so white
 Shining above clouds ashen as the night,

Brewing darkness, dwelling with might
Tearing the sun as your opaqueness ignites

Approaching you emerge with eternal power
All orbs fade as dreams devour…

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Rhia Madison Thomer May 9, 2009 at 7:56 AM this was so powerful, and beautiful. thanks for the comment! <3 madison

John Heck November 30, 2008 at 4:27 AM Dear Farah - Beautiful poetry as always! Congratulations on your 3 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Michael Jordan November 1, 2008 at 4:42 PM Farah outstanding work all three to the finals - Congratulations - God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown October 28, 2008 at 7:27 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Farah. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

P Sheart October 27, 2008 at 3:54 PM Hi Farah Congrats on all your amazing poems making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!!! Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter October 27, 2008 at 5:35 AM Warmest congrats dear Farah on your 3 poems making the first round! Good luck! Love, Shar

Mohammad Yamin October 26, 2008 at 5:27 PM Dear Farah, Congratulations on your poem with two others titled War and Allegiance and Thunder Aloud making the first round of the International Poetry Competition held on Sept. 1, 2008. The win is well deserved. Your poems are really remarkable. Well done! -Mohammad

Sue Mason October 26, 2008 at 4:25 PM Great visuals with this one, farrah and congratulations on having THREE (!!)of your writes included in the semi-finals of the PoetrySoup contest !! Good luck!

Deneen White August 26, 2008 at 4:00 PM hi Ms. young one, congrats on being featured, take care D-nyce

Sharon Winter August 25, 2008 at 1:55 PM Congratulations dear Farah on this amazing poem being featured! Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr. August 25, 2008 at 8:25 AM Congratulations Young One, on "Brewing Darkness" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

Brian Strand August 25, 2008 at 12:52 AM Farah,Congrats on your feature this week.Rgds Brian

Michael Jordan August 24, 2008 at 7:20 PM Farah an amazing poem - You know I find it funny that I have read your work as long as i have and just now had it dawn on me where you are from - I have always wanted to visit that region from the bible stories as a child - Congrats on the feature

James Foulk August 9, 2008 at 5:35 PM a great poem, warm, and touching, enjoyed reading it, thank you for reading my seeds hiding and for your comment