Beautiful Scars Poet Lay

Brevity Muse - Cl

for you are my BREVITY MUSE,
the deep metaphors i searched for-
the rhythm to your heart i shan’t lose,
(love, it’s your verses i adore)

coalesced by the vows we swore
under the autumn crimson hues-
depth of my rhyme you did restore…
for our bodies and souls did fuse

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1.26.20
Oh-No A Twisted Char-Lay Poetry Contest
Charles Messina

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John Watt February 16, 2020 at 10:30 AM LuLoo, beautiful job painting within the 8x8 canvas constraints. I love "the rhythm to your heart i shan’t lose". I shall have to meet your brevity muse someday, lol! Congrats on #1 ~ John

Charles Messina February 16, 2020 at 9:29 AM This is so beautiful, Lu Loo. You did an awesome job writing this gem. Congrats on your 1st place win! Charlie

Sam Kauffman January 26, 2020 at 1:39 PM This is so lovely and I love te way you work out the theme in "brevity." Good luc in the contest! Beautiful Scars January 27, 2020 at 9:30 AM thank you dear Sam! keyboards can be so sneaky...lol x:-) Beautiful Scars January 27, 2020 at 9:30 AM thank you dear Sam! keyboards can be so sneaky...lol x:-) Sam Kauffman January 26, 2020 at 1:40 PM Seems my keyborad has objections to "the" and "luck."