Brett and Rhett - Nursery Rhyme

Messy twins Brett and Rhett
Having fun playing with mud
Squatting and crawling
Diving and falling
In ooey gooey mud

Brett is sitting facing Rhett
Rhett spatters some muck
On Brett's left cheek
Brett spatters more muck
On Rhett's right cheek

Head to toe dipped in slush
Brett and Rhett laughing with glee
Playing with the sludge
Squelching and squishing
Sloshing and splashing
The sticky slimy mud


Date: 04/19/2021
Submitted for: Nursery Rhyme 5 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Makama Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:31 PM
What a poem with fun-filled lines. A big big congratulations to you.
Merryman Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Messy, messy, but that's why it's fun! Congrats on your win, Anitha! Blessings, Kim M
Roper Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 8:28 PM
Anitha, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations on your win, Anitha. A cute nursery rhyme - kids love playing with mud. Love ~ Mala
Proxenos Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Anitha, children love mud and muddy puddles and throwing mud at each other,it is so cute to watch and you capture these moments in your terrific poem! Congratulations my friend on your awesome win, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Boreham Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 9:58 PM
Love Brett and Rhett, awesome nursery rhyme Anitha :)
Bangalee Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 9:04 PM
excellent the rhyme is
Brul Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 8:09 PM
Oh this is so cute!! kids would love this! Best wishes Ani..
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 12:04 PM
Hello Anitha, it sounds like they were having fun. Blessings my friend.
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 10:18 AM
sounds like they are a mucky pair lol:-) hugs jan xx
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