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Breezy

"Granny cut my hair", grandson said "I'll just take you to town". "No, don't spend that money", he said "Ouch, that pulls" said with frown Those ladies and men at those salons Make it look so easy Just run those clippers up those heads In just one sweep breezy Well to tell truth, heads are odd shaped Those clippers don't just flow There are bumps along crooked way Had to plough trifallow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/13/2012 5:05:00 PM
nice write Sara,barber and a poet,lol
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:13:00 PM
the rites of passage so well scribed, sara.. you have a unique way with words and expressions...was the haircut breezy?.. enjoyed!.:) hugggs!
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Date: 8/13/2012 6:02:00 AM
It amuses me, Sarah. Thanks for sharing this fantastic poem. Have a grace-filled day always!
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Date: 8/12/2012 8:01:00 PM
ouchy
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Date: 8/11/2012 9:30:00 PM
What a clever poem my friend! I really enjoyed this remarkable write that says so much about my awkward shaped head...that's why I go to the salon! What a wonderful piece Sara, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/11/2012 5:56:00 PM
enjoyable to read.
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