Breezy

"Granny cut my hair", grandson said "I'll just take you to town". "No, don't spend that money", he said "Ouch, that pulls" said with frown Those ladies and men at those salons Make it look so easy Just run those clippers up those heads In just one sweep breezy Well to tell truth, heads are odd shaped Those clippers don't just flow There are bumps along crooked way Had to plough trifallow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Palmer Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 5:05 PM
nice write Sara,barber and a poet,lol
Onclaud Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 1:13 PM
the rites of passage so well scribed, sara.. you have a unique way with words and expressions...was the haircut breezy?.. enjoyed!.:) hugggs!
Gasun Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 6:02 AM
It amuses me, Sarah. Thanks for sharing this fantastic poem. Have a grace-filled day always!
Culverhouse Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 8:01 PM
ouchy
Sivey Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 9:30 PM
What a clever poem my friend! I really enjoyed this remarkable write that says so much about my awkward shaped head...that's why I go to the salon! What a wonderful piece Sara, Great Work!!
Wright Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 5:56 PM
enjoyable to read.
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