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Breezing Trees Heard the Whispers of Leaves

Amidst trees cover; shelters shadow, lace Ferns, and flora. A citadel's embrace Once coppice now cracks, and cushion soft moss. Liana crawls upon the stone, exhausts Castle walls for access to the filter Of sunlight, sweet fragrant magic philter. Noiseless dark and deep, disquiet rhythmic Mistral wind, alongside natures lactic, Lying in ill warrant still slumbering. Its own age quill rule; restless wandering In its grandeur, brandish securities. Ought they, beget these magical beauties, Crows radiant mid-night impudent thieves, Where breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves. 4/17/2020
Poetry Contest: Poetic Lines From A Poetry Soup Poet - Vijay Pandit Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves - From the poem, The last goodbye Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 5/3/2020 8:19:00 PM
Great imagery! Love mistral wind. Congrats on first place, Eve!
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Date: 5/3/2020 8:01:00 PM
Hi Eve. Loved your take in this one. Will read more than once. Beautiful! hope you are well and happy!
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Date: 5/3/2020 7:33:00 PM
You do write beautifully, Eve! Congratulations.
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Date: 5/3/2020 3:02:00 PM
Very nicely written Eve, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 5/3/2020 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You write so beautifully. Enjoy your day and win.........
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Date: 5/3/2020 11:49:00 AM
CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece, Eve! Janice
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Date: 5/3/2020 9:27:00 AM
'Magical beauties' so well displayed. Placement so well deserved. Congrats, Eve. Great work. Blessings.
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Date: 5/3/2020 5:57:00 AM
An amazing sonnet and one of the best I have read recently... the words usage is brilliant and all kept to from... Have to be careful of those crows... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 4/22/2020 8:00:00 PM
Pulled together in a masterful painting. Love it alot Eve!
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Date: 4/21/2020 1:46:00 AM
This sonnet mimics the sonnets of the old masters - Shakespeare for one, Coleridge for another and Thoreau. Well penned!
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Date: 4/19/2020 8:04:00 PM
This is lovely, Eve, probably a winner - certainly better than mine!
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Date: 4/18/2020 4:09:00 PM
Great imagery Eve--a splendid write weaving in the sights and sounds of nature.
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Date: 4/18/2020 7:13:00 AM
How sorry I feel for trees that find themselves in forest fires - I love trees and they have so much to tell us as some have been around for hundreds of years Their leaves rustle in glory, telling us their life's story. Terrific write Eve, as always, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/17/2020 8:47:00 PM
Hello Eve … trees are magical. They provide everything needed in life so why do we cut them down. With their leaves whispering if only we could take heed, but soon the winter shall claim them - thank you Eve - Lindsay
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