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Breezing Tree Commands Tiny Creatures

Everyone come along for the shower. Let's dance together amidst the flower; And devour Nature's power, Whilst these tiny droplets descend the river. *Second place in the Poetic lines from Poetry soup Poet Vijay pandit Poetry Contest. Sponsored and judged by Silent One. Note:This is a Rithimus Divisa extracted from the poem "Script of Mother Nature" written by me on 18th April 2020. Submitting today ie, 3rd sep 2020 to Rithimus Divisa 5 Poetry contest.Sponsored by Gregory R Barden.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2020 2:48:00 PM

a sweet breath of air from nature. The title was quite cute and metaphorical.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:43:00 AM

Thankyou dear Andrea mam for your encouraging words of appreciation.:-)Glad you liked my title .:-)Take care.Much love:-)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/3/2020 10:20:00 PM

Poetry to take one's breath away..Truly beautiful..

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:41:00 AM

Thankyou Harry sir for your kind visit and warm appreciation:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/3/2020 1:04:00 PM

A poem in its own right Deepa, best of luck in the contest. Tom

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:40:00 AM

Thankyou dear Tom sir :-) Best wishes for you too.. I believe your doing well..!! Take care.Warm regards:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/3/2020 5:53:00 AM

Gorgeous imagery and delightful tone adorn the stanza you selected for Greg's contest. All the best Deepa.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/3/2020 7:43:00 AM

Thankyou dear Vijay sir..:-D I remember this lovely contest in which your poetic line was chosen by S.O sir~"Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves" and as participants we used your line to create our poems:-) Again ,Thanks for your kind words of appreciation:-) have a great day..!!