breeze twine spider's web

earth shadow
dim path wake
to loss quake

timidly its
quietness deep
infinite voice
appears restless

nesting birds await
conceal, motionless
safely perched between
aspen leaves as cold
breezes lace a web

12/23/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Nicholsen Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 12:26 PM
This is awesome work thanks for sharing.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Enjoy your win...............
May Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 3:10 AM
Congrats on your win Eve. Nicely penned
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Lovely with it's imagery. Merry Xmas, Eve
Buhagiar Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 2:19 AM
Incredibly beautiful in its composition, with imagery that is superb. Happy Christmas. Hugs.
Sharma  Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 7:01 PM
Oh my, this is such a profound and breathtaking poem that weaves emotions with so much depth, hidden behind these delicate Imageries.. "earth shadow dim path wake to loss quake" That opening sets the overall ambience in an impeccable way! "timidly its quietness deep infinite voice appears restless" This gives me the expression that if one agrees to listen in the silence, infinite restless voices yearn to be heard.. just so brilliantly crafted dear Eve.. I loved reading this, sending light!
Greenhough Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 12:59 PM
A soft worded poem of Spring or Summer which ends with the dynamics of the wind. A spectacular poem that I full enjoyed.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 12:11 PM
A lovely write. Winter is hard on the birds. I love your last line. Merry Christmas..................
One Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 10:57 AM
Your poem invites readers to contemplate the subtle yet powerful moments in the natural world, prompting reflection on the interconnectedness of life and the quiet beauty that often goes unnoticed..
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