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Breeze of Hope

Amidst the mountains so tall an straight, I begged the horizons to know my fate. As I glimpsed through the curtains so hard, There it was all across the sward. Within my soul,fluttered the fresh summer breeze, Flows over the rivers and goes across the seas. Brought about hope in life, and fresh light, No leaves withered,none blossoms blight.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/8/2015 4:05:00 PM

Hi Saanika, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 2/8/2015 3:13:00 PM

Saanika, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT