Breeze of Awakening

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Kissed By The Passing Breeze of Awakening
Sponsored by: John lawless
07/10/2023

Achieving a state of deep meditation I stepped outside of my perceived reality; and it felt like my soul was kissed by the passing breeze of awakening as I merged with the universal consciousness; tethered to a profound awareness of "I am." My mind conjoined my heart and soul and I became one with all there is, ever was, and ever will be, as I experienced enlightenment, nirvana and love simultaneously. And leaving my physical body behind, my mind was astroprojected at the speed of thought, through time and space beyond death: to the consciousness of life, and I felt at peace for the first time.

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/23/2023 6:34:00 PM

This is so beautifully written Emile :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/23/2023 8:01:00 PM

Thanks, Mystic; it's always so nice to hear from you, my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/10/2023 4:08:00 PM

Hello Emile, I just read this poem. i also meditate. I do it every day. During the evening. Or afternoon. I feel so much better afterwards. My friend. enjoy your evening. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/11/2023 4:33:00 AM

Hello Emile, Yes to mediate is relaxing it also clears my thoughts when it is cluttered. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/10/2023 8:43:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene, I'm pleased to hear that you meditate, it is something that centers you, my friend, Emile.