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Breeze Makers

The Makara breeze makers Turn slowly under the clouds Clockwise As if forming a connection Between time And airflow Their one legged man made intrusion On the spectacular landscape Three armed trinity Man uses nature in the quest for power

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Russell Sivey

Date: 2/5/2013 2:02:00 AM

This is a fantastic and wondrous write my friend! I loved the line, "Man uses nature in the quest for power" which is so true especially if you look at natural energy! Wind energy or solar power are two extremely beneficial ways man uses nature for power...I know you probably meant that in a different way but you could have taken this route, as I did! Very well written Gary, I loved reading it tonight! Great Work!!