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Breeze Makers

The Makara breeze makers
Turn slowly under the clouds
Clockwise
As if forming a connection
Between time
And airflow

Their one legged man made intrusion
On the spectacular landscape
Three armed trinity
Man uses nature in the quest for power

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Russell Sivey

Date: 2/5/2013 2:02:00 AM

This is a fantastic and wondrous write my friend! I loved the line, "Man uses nature in the quest for power" which is so true especially if you look at natural energy! Wind energy or solar power are two extremely beneficial ways man uses nature for power...I know you probably meant that in a different way but you could have taken this route, as I did! Very well written Gary, I loved reading it tonight! Great Work!!