Breeze In the Setting Sun

Colours of the concluding day now shine 
The wind blows free through the pine 
Now the road ahead tells the next tale 
What lies behind is movie reel of trails, 
Once tread upon by old troubled minds 

Another wrinkle appears in the leaves 
As they drift with the gentle breeze 
Only to kiss the sea with memories 
Though it may rot in time, they remain vividly 
Intact inside the stem of a thousand experiences.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 5:35 PM
Hello David Ferguson, I like to see the trees sway with the wind bending this way and that. I have enjoyed this poem. i look forward to your comment. have a nice day my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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February 10, 2016 at 12:37 AM
AWESOME
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