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Breeze Does Please

Breeze-where do you begin? I mean what is your origin? At the time when you were born Where wind's rough nature gone? How are you so mild? Gently you have sailed With no anger you survive Our hope you easily revive Like mother you touch Great bliss, it does fetch Like this only you die And are reaching the sky Why are you turning into a gust And be here an unwanted guest Do you change your tactics And also play dirty politics? Please teach me a lot How not to be very hot Your approach is really cool I want to join your school Accept me as your student As your policy is brilliant

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Date: 8/19/2022 3:51:00 PM
Hello my venkataraman, The wind when it blows is never the same. It is sometimes gently, or harsh or vey pushy. It could be cool amd very, very cold. Depends on the mood of the wind. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2022 10:56:00 AM
Hello My Venkataraman, I like thes words./Wind is like a doctor. Your welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Mv Venkataraman
Date: 8/20/2022 9:19:00 AM
Wind is like a doctor, Storm, whirlpool, hailstorm, breeze, gust, even air are all specializations. Thanks for your kind words!

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