Breeze

the mountain breeze softly wafts
like the breath of a lover
blowing my hair
kissing my face
I close my eyes
and remember dreams
where fantasy returns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 15, 2009 at 6:16 AM
I enjoyed this beautiful free verse, JB.
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