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tried a haiku today. sounds easy till you actually do it. mine turned out pretty fun though!

breeze

wind in my long hair,
laughter spilling on the street,
the day feels alive.
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Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 9:07 AM
Wonderful
Pataki Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 12:46 PM
Thank you Andrea! I tried my best, I don't often try other structures beside rhyme or free verse. Have a lovely day, Ariana.
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