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'breed Memories'

play your cards right, she might just fall for you she might just like you, like can progress to love memories breed from moments we think are inconsequential take that step, you have to start somewhere in the end those moments last forever 15/05/2011... 18:55

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/24/2011 12:05:00 PM

A nicely composed poem, with a lovely warm feel to it. Well done.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2011 7:40:00 PM

Good day Wilma, or should I say night... it is night here.. and i like the way you use breed.. in your poem... I like that, cuz, we all know breeds come in all forms... and so do memories// But, i want a breed of purity... yes one that will last forever... thanks for sharing,..p.d.

James Foulk

Date: 5/16/2011 4:32:00 PM

very creative piece you penned here Wilma, enjoyed it.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2011 1:42:00 PM

I enjoyed your creative thoughts on friendship and relationship, Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2011 1:41:00 PM

I enjoyed your creative thoughts on friendship and relationship, Wilma

Kash Poet

Date: 5/15/2011 9:05:00 PM

Such beautiful lines you have penned here Wilma"memories breed from moment".Just love this wonderful poem...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2011 12:18:00 PM

Friendship often does turn to love -- the more mature kind, not infatuation, Wilma. I think people who are friends first and then become lovers have a better chance of having long-term relationships. Beautifully said, dear. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/15/2011 10:26:00 AM

A gem from your wise finger tips, well said and written my dear Poet across the pond.. love from me to you.. Michael