Wilma Neels Poet Etheree

'breed Memories'

play
your cards
right, she might
just fall for you
she might just like you, 
like can progress to love
memories breed from moments
we think are inconsequential
take that step, you have to start somewhere
in the end those moments last forever




15/05/2011... 18:55

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Zzzzz Zzzzz June 24, 2011 at 12:05 PM A nicely composed poem, with a lovely warm feel to it. Well done.

Poet Destroyer A May 21, 2011 at 7:40 PM Good day Wilma, or should I say night... it is night here.. and i like the way you use breed.. in your poem... I like that, cuz, we all know breeds come in all forms... and so do memories// But, i want a breed of purity... yes one that will last forever... thanks for sharing,..p.d.

James Foulk May 16, 2011 at 4:32 PM very creative piece you penned here Wilma, enjoyed it.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 16, 2011 at 1:42 PM I enjoyed your creative thoughts on friendship and relationship, Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta May 16, 2011 at 1:41 PM I enjoyed your creative thoughts on friendship and relationship, Wilma

Kash Poet May 15, 2011 at 9:05 PM Such beautiful lines you have penned here Wilma"memories breed from moment".Just love this wonderful poem...

Carolyn Devonshire May 15, 2011 at 12:18 PM Friendship often does turn to love -- the more mature kind, not infatuation, Wilma. I think people who are friends first and then become lovers have a better chance of having long-term relationships. Beautifully said, dear. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico May 15, 2011 at 10:26 AM A gem from your wise finger tips, well said and written my dear Poet across the pond.. love from me to you.. Michael