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Breathtaking Tableau

On a peaceful day,
          Tucked in a forest;
          As lovely steams fall,
           A rainbow appears.
             For all to witness,
            It's so breathtaking. 








* 6 Lines only, 5 syllables per Line



Contest: Tableau- Six Lines
Sponsor: Joseph May
03/16/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Evans Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 10:57 PM
Congrats, Alexis!! Waterfalls and rainbow take my breath away, always!!
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Heya Alexis, congratulations on this magnificent piece of art, picturesque and poetically brilliant, cheers David
Mohn Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 3:23 PM
what a gorgeous picture and poem as well...congratulations Alexis :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your write and picture are "breathtaking." Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 2:43 PM
There it is. Truly a breathtaking rainbow, Alexis. Congrats on your win in the contest, Gershon
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Lovely as a rainbow. Congrats on your TOP win, Alexis.
Kauffman Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Alexis, it is a breathtaking experience to find a rainbow waterfall. Nicely described. You set the scene so well. Congratulations on your win. Blessings on your weekend!
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:20 AM
back with Congrats. WELL DONE
May Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:12 AM
Congrats on your win Alexis, Wonderful write
Y. Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Hi Joseph, You hosted a great contest. I appreciate my win in your contest. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 1:05 PM
very nice, Alexis. Water falls ARE so breath taking
Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 2:15 AM
This is ever so lovely! Poem goes so well with the photo Alexis!
Mcconnell Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 10:37 PM
Such a beautiful image matched by your lovely piece making a superb match Alexis. Blessings always,Gordon
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Hello Alexis Y. yes the rainbows are breathe taking. Enjoy your day my friend.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 9:40 AM
Alexis, such a beautiful picture! Love it, so pretty sight with forest, waterfall, and a rainbow! And in so few words! Enchanting ~ Mala
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Lovely imagery Alexis, something magical about a forest and even more so with a stunning Waterfall. Good luck in the contest Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Perfect picture, perfect poem. Well done Alexis.
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