Breathtaking Tableau

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On a peaceful day, Tucked in a forest; As lovely steams fall, A rainbow appears. For all to witness, It's so breathtaking. * 6 Lines only, 5 syllables per Line Contest: Tableau- Six Lines Sponsor: Joseph May 03/16/2021

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Marilene Evans

Date: 3/26/2021 10:57:00 PM

Congrats, Alexis!! Waterfalls and rainbow take my breath away, always!!

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/26/2021 3:49:00 PM

Heya Alexis, congratulations on this magnificent piece of art, picturesque and poetically brilliant, cheers David

David Mohn

Date: 3/26/2021 3:23:00 PM

what a gorgeous picture and poem as well...congratulations Alexis :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/26/2021 2:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Your write and picture are "breathtaking." Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/26/2021 2:43:00 PM

There it is. Truly a breathtaking rainbow, Alexis. Congrats on your win in the contest, Gershon

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/26/2021 1:43:00 PM

Lovely as a rainbow. Congrats on your TOP win, Alexis.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/26/2021 12:24:00 PM

Alexis, it is a breathtaking experience to find a rainbow waterfall. Nicely described. You set the scene so well. Congratulations on your win. Blessings on your weekend!