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Breathtaking View

As I laid under the pale moonlight, I looked up; saw a shooting star. It was breathtaking, but it doesn’t come close to what I see in your eyes. Alexis Y. 07-20-2021

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Date: 7/26/2021 4:07:00 PM
Ahh!! How romantic. Good comparison writing in this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/22/2021 1:56:00 PM
Romance at its best Alexis, truly breathtaking! Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 7/22/2021 11:02:00 AM
- Romantic under the moon ... lovely written, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/22/2021 1:28:00 AM
That's so sweet, Alexis:)
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Date: 7/21/2021 6:30:00 PM
So sweet, Alexis. Who needs a telescope?! :) gw
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Date: 7/21/2021 5:25:00 PM
this is beautiful... the closing lines tell it all... good write Alexis! hugs :)
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Date: 7/21/2021 5:15:00 PM
Indeed, Alexis! I absolutely adore how you set up your beautiful finale. Your romantic poem is both dreamy and breathtaking. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/21/2021 5:56:00 AM
Beautiful my friend.
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Date: 7/21/2021 4:57:00 AM
How sweet and delightful, Alexis! Into my FAVES.
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Date: 7/20/2021 11:05:00 PM
Great contrast, Alexis.
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