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Breathtaking

Sponsor: John Hamilton Beyond traveling miracles of disbelief Resides a current carrying a leaf Echoed in caves ravishingly defined Ablazed memories trailing behind Topaz fields lingering mineral scents Haikus of nature with concurring assents Transcending divinity allured by magnets Amorous affection drawn by dynamics Katydids singing releasing sweet tones Interconnected lattice covering a throne Neems carrying fruit creates new life Galvanic enthrall, an exquisite blithe Date Written: March 11, 2016

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Date: 3/14/2016 10:03:00 AM
A wonderful write Laura nice use of vocabulary some new words! Congrats on your fine placement! Next contest will be rhymed again and you will place higher!
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Date: 3/14/2016 8:07:00 PM
Thank you John, I am embarrassed now! I didn't know it shouldn't have rhymed! Have a great night, thanks :)-luloo
Date: 3/11/2016 2:47:00 PM
Great entry, best wishes in the contest. There are, in my mind, as many really good poems in this competition as I think I've seen and I think your in the mix...
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Date: 3/11/2016 2:48:00 PM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 3/11/2016 12:06:00 PM
Each and every line is beautiful, so beautiful that they could stand alone one and one - Together a breathtaking poem, Laura - Good luck in the contest ..... and a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 12:10:00 PM
aw thanks Anne-Lise you are always so sweet :)-luloo *smiles*
Date: 3/11/2016 10:57:00 AM
Nice read! Thanks for posting!
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 11:54:00 AM
thank you Robert :)-luloo *smiles*
Date: 3/11/2016 10:55:00 AM
Lovely, LuLo - just lovely ... CayCay (I hope you are feeling better!:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 11:07:00 AM
Yup a little better every day, thank you :) (email) Be blessed CayCay you are one sweet woman! -luloo *smiles* *hugs*

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