Beautiful Scars Poet Acrostic

Breathtaking

Sponsor: John Hamilton


Beyond traveling miracles of disbelief

Resides a current carrying a leaf

Echoed in caves ravishingly defined

Ablazed memories trailing behind 

Topaz fields lingering mineral scents

Haikus of nature with concurring assents

Transcending divinity allured by magnets

Amorous affection drawn by dynamics

Katydids singing releasing sweet tones

Interconnected lattice covering a throne

Neems carrying fruit creates new life

Galvanic enthrall, an exquisite blithe 


Date Written: March 11, 2016 

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John Hamilton March 14, 2016 at 10:03 AM A wonderful write Laura nice use of vocabulary some new words! Congrats on your fine placement! Next contest will be rhymed again and you will place higher! Beautiful Scars March 14, 2016 at 8:07 PM Thank you John, I am embarrassed now! I didn't know it shouldn't have rhymed! Have a great night, thanks :)-luloo

Charlie Smith March 11, 2016 at 2:47 PM Great entry, best wishes in the contest. There are, in my mind, as many really good poems in this competition as I think I've seen and I think your in the mix... Beautiful Scars March 11, 2016 at 2:48 PM thank you Charlie :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen March 11, 2016 at 12:06 PM Each and every line is beautiful, so beautiful that they could stand alone one and one - Together a breathtaking poem, Laura - Good luck in the contest ..... and a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Beautiful Scars March 11, 2016 at 12:10 PM aw thanks Anne-Lise you are always so sweet :)-luloo *smiles*

Robert Heemstra March 11, 2016 at 10:57 AM Nice read! Thanks for posting! Beautiful Scars March 11, 2016 at 11:54 AM thank you Robert :)-luloo *smiles*

CayCay Godwin March 11, 2016 at 10:55 AM Lovely, LuLo - just lovely ... CayCay (I hope you are feeling better!:) Beautiful Scars March 11, 2016 at 11:07 AM Yup a little better every day, thank you :) (email) Be blessed CayCay you are one sweet woman! -luloo *smiles* *hugs*