Breathtaking

B rilliant beauty meandering from curve to curve
R arely will you find elsewhere except in Reshi Khola
E ye catching gurgling river casting spell on viewer
A midst the lovely blue hills of sub Himalayan valley
T here it surrounds the glorious forest and tea garden
H appy pebbles sparkling in the crystal clear water
T emple with Lord Buddha’s palm always calming you
A pril and May teeming with amazing birds and flowers
K iss your soulmate breathing in the enveloping aroma
I n between the magical land of Sikkim and Bengal
N estles the Khola  or the river in the famous Silk Route
G o and get the mighty gift of peace and fluent silence
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March 10, 2016
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Marc Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 7:30 AM
Lovely from start to finish. Fluent silence is such a wonderful phrase.
Gupta Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 3:48 AM
Thank you so much for providing me with the opportunity to look back and enjoy..
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March 16, 2016 at 6:37 AM
Anytime Probir,.... Linda
Gupta Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 12:43 PM
Well.... ...Probir
A   Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Probir, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA
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March 16, 2016 at 1:22 AM
LINDA, Many thanks for the congratulations... luv.probir...
Raina Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Gupta Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 12:02 AM
Thank you very much...
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:48 PM
It sounds so pretty, Probir. Would love to see it myself.
Gupta Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Thank you. Would love to accompany you in that case.....
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