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Breathtaking

B eauteous bewitching botanical gardens in the early morn R ivers rhythmically running, as we race to adorn E verlasting earthly echoes, the beauty that is shown A bundant acoustical atmospheres playing heavens tone T imeless tall trees that titillate the aromatic air H oofing hormonal horses mating their scented mare T ropical topless tanning on the island of the blue lagoon A lphabetical ascending acrostic’s that sing to the moon K ookie kinky kisses that I shall receive from you I mpulsive inviting incantations in our lovers brew N aughty nightly nightgowns of witch you will undress G orgeous genital gestures, that I shall soon caress. March.09.2016 For Breathtaking Acrostic Contest

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Samiha Zubair

Date: 3/23/2016 7:31:00 PM

Erotical write, how a victim of nature's bite. Beautifully inked down

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/23/2016 9:28:00 PM

Thank you my friend Samiha...for your visit and kind words...god bless...^WW^

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/20/2016 7:01:00 PM

Dear Winged Warrior Interesting and very entertaining, nicely written, love the imagery, it gives a twist on things, enjoyed, and thanks for your comments on my poetry as well, you have a great week ahead, cheri

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/20/2016 7:19:00 PM

Thank you my friend cheri...your presence is greatly appreciated...god bless...with admiration...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2016 9:18:00 PM

Well, that got very natural even to the ending!! A very alliterative poem, Winged Warrior! (wish I could go to a place like this)

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/12/2016 4:10:00 AM

Thank you Andrea...are you over 18 my dear lol...actually we should get a bunch from the Soup and go to some tropical Island...wouldn't that be something...S1 would have a heyday LOL...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/11/2016 2:40:00 PM

- Gorgeous and breathtaking !!! - A first class poem, Winged :) - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/11/2016 3:35:00 PM

Thank you my gorgeous and breathtaking friend...you have a fantastic weekend Anne Lise...double hugs...()():):)...^WW^

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 3/10/2016 8:21:00 PM

I'm learning something new here every day! This is a "Breath...Taking" acrostic! Write On ^WW^...Write It On! :-)

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/10/2016 10:55:00 PM

Thank you my brother Walter...your presence brings my appreciation up another notch...god bless...^WW^

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/10/2016 12:38:00 PM

Really nice WW. I like the alliteration it really enhances the write but the last line OO la la. Peace my friend:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/10/2016 12:55:00 PM

Sort of...

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/10/2016 12:49:00 PM

Thank you Daniel..I think I broke S1's heart with that line lol...are you over 18? lol...^WW^

Anthony Mark

Date: 3/10/2016 10:13:00 AM

Ok W.W, yes it's well written, and some very good Aliteration, ....but...the flow is a little bit lost because of the individual lines being so strong....perhaps a little enjambment would assist , and make this a very good piece of Acrostic....?

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/10/2016 10:26:00 AM

This was my first attempt with acrostic's...plus S1 is got me working overtime with his challenging contests lol...^WW^

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/10/2016 10:20:00 AM

Go ahead Mark if you like to revamp it...work your magic buddy...I await...^WW^

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/10/2016 7:48:00 AM

Wow. That's quite the write. I really loved the alliteration at the beginning of each line. Good luck in the contest.

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/10/2016 7:54:00 AM

Thank you my friend Eileen...I've learned much here on the Soup...from all the great poets that reside here...you included...I bow to the Master's...oh my damn back again lol...^WW^