Breathtaking

B eauteous bewitching botanical gardens in the early morn
R ivers rhythmically running, as we race to adorn
E verlasting earthly echoes, the beauty that is shown
A bundant acoustical atmospheres playing heavens tone
T imeless tall trees that titillate the aromatic air
H oofing hormonal horses mating their scented mare
T ropical topless tanning on the island of the blue lagoon
A lphabetical ascending acrostic’s that sing to the moon
K ookie kinky kisses that I shall receive from you
I mpulsive inviting incantations in our lovers brew
N aughty nightly nightgowns of witch you will undress
G orgeous genital gestures, that I shall soon caress.


March.09.2016    

For Breathtaking Acrostic Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/23/2016 7:31:00 PM
Erotical write, how a victim of nature's bite. Beautifully inked down
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/23/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thank you my friend Samiha...for your visit and kind words...god bless...^WW^
Date: 3/20/2016 7:01:00 PM
Dear Winged Warrior Interesting and very entertaining, nicely written, love the imagery, it gives a twist on things, enjoyed, and thanks for your comments on my poetry as well, you have a great week ahead, cheri
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/20/2016 7:19:00 PM
Thank you my friend cheri...your presence is greatly appreciated...god bless...with admiration...^WW^
Date: 3/11/2016 9:18:00 PM
Well, that got very natural even to the ending!! A very alliterative poem, Winged Warrior! (wish I could go to a place like this)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/12/2016 4:10:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...are you over 18 my dear lol...actually we should get a bunch from the Soup and go to some tropical Island...wouldn't that be something...S1 would have a heyday LOL...^WW^
Date: 3/11/2016 2:40:00 PM
- Gorgeous and breathtaking !!! - A first class poem, Winged :) - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/11/2016 3:35:00 PM
Thank you my gorgeous and breathtaking friend...you have a fantastic weekend Anne Lise...double hugs...()():):)...^WW^
Date: 3/10/2016 8:21:00 PM
I'm learning something new here every day! This is a "Breath...Taking" acrostic! Write On ^WW^...Write It On! :-)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/10/2016 10:55:00 PM
Thank you my brother Walter...your presence brings my appreciation up another notch...god bless...^WW^
Date: 3/10/2016 12:38:00 PM
Really nice WW. I like the alliteration it really enhances the write but the last line OO la la. Peace my friend:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/10/2016 12:55:00 PM
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/10/2016 12:49:00 PM
Thank you Daniel..I think I broke S1's heart with that line lol...are you over 18? lol...^WW^
Date: 3/10/2016 10:13:00 AM
Ok W.W, yes it's well written, and some very good Aliteration, ....but...the flow is a little bit lost because of the individual lines being so strong....perhaps a little enjambment would assist , and make this a very good piece of Acrostic....?
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/10/2016 10:26:00 AM
This was my first attempt with acrostic's...plus S1 is got me working overtime with his challenging contests lol...^WW^
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/10/2016 10:20:00 AM
Go ahead Mark if you like to revamp it...work your magic buddy...I await...^WW^
Date: 3/10/2016 7:48:00 AM
Wow. That's quite the write. I really loved the alliteration at the beginning of each line. Good luck in the contest.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/10/2016 7:54:00 AM
Thank you my friend Eileen...I've learned much here on the Soup...from all the great poets that reside here...you included...I bow to the Master's...oh my damn back again lol...^WW^
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