Breathtaking

Breathtaking


Birth of Jesus Christ

Red rose sacrificed

Executed setting forth

Administering forgiveness

To everyone on earth

Healing euphoria

Taking one’s breath away

A comfort that lies

Kindly when we pray

Inspiring an awe of beauty

Nurturing our faith

Giving us hope            Breathtaking
 

3/9/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Devnath  Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 6:09 PM
Wonderful acrostic my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Nicely done and inspiring, Eve. Good luck in the contest.
La France Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Eve, I really like how you did this acrostic, quite wonderful and I am loving it 7 ~
Onclaud Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:30 PM
astounding theme and wordplay, eve.. greeat one for lent!..huggs
Sathasivam Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 3:22 AM
Excellent. Beautifully done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Bhurani Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:07 AM
Vry fitting to the theme..,awesome...gl
Warrior Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Beautifully done Eve...words of wisdom...god bless...(:^WW^:)
Leiser Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 11:53 PM
You are right, Rve, this is truly breathtaking :)
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