Breathtaking

Breathtaking

B illions of years ago the universe was born
R evealing a resplendent beauty that was and is
E verything and more one could expect from
A n amazing designer and architect and
T imekeeper, beyond all human  understanding
H eavenly bodies and beings, celestial phenomenon
T hat is incomprehensible in it´s complexity
A nd simplicity in syncronicity with heavenly
K indness and grace towards the human race
I gniting within us a humility of heart and spirit
N ever negating in our minds eye the unimaginable
G lory that is to be revealed for our eternal blessing.

John Derek Hamilton
March 07,2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Truly a superb acrostic and one that has truth as its message. Closing verse is gold my friend. A7
Makama Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:29 AM
This is one of the bright part of a moody day as today for me. I am blessed reading this piece. Keep on writing lovely. cheers!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 6:53 AM
Masterful write John .. A perfect 7 n a fav ..
Hamilton Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Thanks Upma
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 3:35 PM
This is an outstanding example for your contest John. Your have expressed a visual work of art with your words. #7 I am faving this beauty my friend!
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Wow Thanks Connie so much for your kind words and your fave.
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Breathtaking is the word John - great acrostic:-) hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Thanks Jan looking forward to your entry.
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