Breaths For the Seasons

Autumn leaves encase
A ground once caressed by heat
Tread carefully here
Beneath your feet animals
Are hiding from winter’s breath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Lokken Avatar
September 26, 2008 at 11:43 AM
Very unique and lovely. The last two lines are very delicate. Good luck.:) Regards, Sara
Mckenzie Avatar
September 26, 2008 at 11:41 AM
UMMMMM I love the tone and feeling of this Tanka so different Good luck in the contest! Laura :) "I love it! winters breath"
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