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Breathlessness

Soul-moving, heart-touching fabrics of a canvas-like existence forming vacuum bubbles of Absoluteness. Breathless Life resurrected into quantum pieces Taking breaths; raining Selflessness Shocking to awareness, forming to Feel. Forming to Live Breathing to understand; being breathless to allow self to live a life IN Understanding of a painted, and cried out, Purpose. Alleviate "Me". Watch it unfold In Breathlessness of its vast structure through the Realization ..that there is none.. [2022-07-28, 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 10 Poetry Contest, Mark Toney]

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Date: 8/5/2022 9:16:00 AM
"Breathing to understand; being breathless to allow self to live a life IN Understanding" I was there once, and need to find my way back. A lot of ambiguity in that ending
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Skye Awenborn
Date: 8/5/2022 11:25:00 AM
I agree that I left it to be interpreted in more ways than one, with the intention to show the very lesson of Breathlessness, as I found it [smiles]. You're the first to have picked this up and I humbly appreciate that from you. Thank you so much!
Date: 7/9/2022 7:16:00 PM
Beautiful poem. From the love of my life...
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Skye Awenborn
Date: 7/18/2022 1:02:00 PM
Thank you, Love <3

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