Breathless Waltz

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Regina Mcintosh.

Written on October 19, 2023

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

It sounds like laughter, the wind, Softly rustling leaves, prayers Fading silence, busy rush Gusts of light, dancing

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/28/2023 5:02:00 AM

Gusts of light, how beautiful it must be to experience this :) have a blessed day filled with gusts of light R xo congrats !

Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 12:52:00 PM

such a lovely selection of words.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 5:49:00 AM

I like the uniqueness of your dodoitsu. With short bursts and ending delightfully! Congratulations, Gina!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/24/2023 5:06:00 AM

Oh my, such an eloquent and enchanting dodoitsu poem this is~ I'm absolutely loving your resplendent wordsmithery here with "Softly rustling leaves, prayers", " Fading silence" Woww, a well deserved win for the contest, heartiest congratulations! :)

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 2:39:00 AM

Dear Gina, This is absolutely gorgeous! How stunning and seamless is your word weaving here! They flow so well together and your syllables are on point! I love the mellifluousness of this dodoitsu, especially how you’ve started it with describing the wind and sound to laughter, so cheerful! And gust of light dancing through, i can see through your delicate lines. Very descriptive and detailed imagery, thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on winning! Well deserved!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/19/2023 2:08:00 PM

a beautiful and soft Dodoitsu, Regina! A masterpiece that gently describes the wind. I'm impressed with your craftsmanship here...am faving. Have a wonderful evening, Sara