Breathless Waltz

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Written on October 19, 2023

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It sounds like laughter, the wind, Softly rustling leaves, prayers Fading silence, busy rush Gusts of light, dancing

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Date: 5/11/2025 3:03:00 AM
Oh I have never seen this form before, and I like short form poetry; this is so eloquent, congratulations
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Date: 10/28/2023 5:02:00 AM
Gusts of light, how beautiful it must be to experience this :) have a blessed day filled with gusts of light R xo congrats !
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Date: 10/24/2023 12:52:00 PM
such a lovely selection of words.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:49:00 AM
I like the uniqueness of your dodoitsu. With short bursts and ending delightfully! Congratulations, Gina!
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:06:00 AM
Oh my, such an eloquent and enchanting dodoitsu poem this is~ I'm absolutely loving your resplendent wordsmithery here with "Softly rustling leaves, prayers", " Fading silence" Woww, a well deserved win for the contest, heartiest congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/24/2023 2:39:00 AM
Dear Gina, This is absolutely gorgeous! How stunning and seamless is your word weaving here! They flow so well together and your syllables are on point! I love the mellifluousness of this dodoitsu, especially how you’ve started it with describing the wind and sound to laughter, so cheerful! And gust of light dancing through, i can see through your delicate lines. Very descriptive and detailed imagery, thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on winning! Well deserved!
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