Unseeking Seeker Poet Jueju

Breathless in God’s light

Love’s nectar sipped, soul’s thirst quenched, 
breathless thus in bliss mists drenched,
happenstance when we’re in trance,
God making erect our stance.

In the zone beyond space-time,
in the void sounds heaven’s chime,
strobes of light that sing love’s song,
when soul’s presence strikes God’s gong.

Light that lights all lights whence seen,
streamed on earth as aura’s sheen,
caused when pheromones mingle,
makes then our soul’s eye single.

Tranquil silence paves the way,
to make soul’s ascent mere play,
that once frigid heart has thawed,
thoughts are synced with mind of God.

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Paula Goldsmith May 29, 2025 at 9:28 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Breathless in God’s light" write. Have a blessed day with your win....... Unseeking Seeker May 29, 2025 at 7:20 PM Thank you, Paula dear, God bless

Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2025 at 4:21 AM - Congratulations :) - hugs Unseeking Seeker May 27, 2025 at 7:18 AM Thank you, Anne :)

Ink Empress May 25, 2025 at 9:37 AM How heartfelt and such a different take on the prompt dear seeker! I love your wordplay here and how it flows as well as how youv written "Light that lights all lights whence seen, streamed on earth as aura’s sheen" beautiful and the ending as always is soul warming. Left me breathless too! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always Unseeking Seeker May 25, 2025 at 6:54 PM I’ll take your word for it then, IE. On my part, I’m not so satisfied with the poem. I wanted to create a symmetrical shape along with the rhyme and syllable count but I think the message could have been presented in a more elegant manner.