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Breathless Heaven

Love you are the spark of starlight entering 
the light that comes from your solar radiance 
eclipsing a heart that overflows with warmth 
orbiting space forever and always circle of joy 
Behind the sun glowing through beams one picture 
as a moon touches the soul smiling deeply captivated 
supernaturally beholding extraordinary beauty appears 
manifesting inside living breathing heartbeats

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Dorian Petersen Potter

February 16, 2020 at 2:37 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^