Breathless He Left Me

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For the Breathless Poetry Contest of Constance la France

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“Maybe love doesn't come from the heart. Maybe it's a psychic jolt that wakes you when you touch them, leaving you breathless.” Christy Johnson

Butterfly kisses and his breath upon my cheek.
Racing heart of mine. I could not resist as he
Enticed me with his gaze. Words he had no need to speak.
Anticipation peaked when that angel boy kissed me,
Thrilling me like I had not been thrilled before.
Heaven-sent was he, for he melted my heart.
Lavished with affection, I reveled in his ardor. 
Enchantment it seemed he practiced as high art.
Such a surprise it was that he had come my way.
So sweetly did he steal my breath away.

How time has flown since then. I think of how
Elation once whalloped me with a romantic WOW.

Love comes and goes. I’ll never know
Even now what happened to the young man who
Fed my soul with sunshine’s happy glow.
That all remains a bliss I cannot live anew.

Magical is breathlessness. Sadly, that feeling
Ends eventually, but how I long again to be reeling!

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Date: 5/29/2025 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Breathless He Left Me" write. Great picture. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 5/27/2025 2:42:00 PM
Beautiful. I love this write. So full of yearning and memory- tied together
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Date: 5/27/2025 4:48:00 AM
- A deeply emotional poem about love, Andrea :) - Congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 5/26/2025 7:40:00 PM
Nice acrostic.
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Date: 5/26/2025 11:36:00 AM
This is so very well written sweet Andrea, i did an etheree for the topic! Hah! I love yours too! You did amazing! And this is so emotive! I love it when you write romance always, and whatever theme you do you do it just effortlessly! Especially felt the lines "Love comes and goes. I’ll never know Even now what happened to the young man who Fed my soul with sunshine’s happy glow. That all remains a bliss I cannot live " anew." Ah my heart! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/26/2025 12:56:00 PM
Thanks. I seem to do well with romance which is strange considering my little expertise!
Date: 5/26/2025 7:22:00 AM
Andrea, your skillfully-written, soul-revealing acrostic poem conveys a powerful theme that I feel sure resonates with many. Janice
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Date: 5/26/2025 6:45:00 AM
Romantic past was a beautiful time we cannot live anew.Very nice .I feel it
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:44:00 PM
Andrea, I am swept off my feet by the majesty of this intensely evocative acrostic. A rippling cascade of iridescent images which remains on topic. A snapshot in time of emotions Finally thanks for your constructive as always review of Emotional Shrapnel. I worked hard on that as you said Howard
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