Breathless Bounty

A dream once entered the hall leading 
to the stairway of enchanting dining room
one guest echoes rang out bells began chiming 
inside an echo to the soul dancing paradise golden sands speak

Blowing whispers silently upon a heartbeat calls 
footsteps your stage platform takes to dancing ignites
into a restless flame flicking warmly on each breath
sweet delight floating in a fresh blue breeze 

Two celestial beings join universes apart our spirits fly 
planets and stars gazing softly twinkle love
on a collision course together we spark lighting up 
silver ore we are the magic that spells are made from dust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/20/2015 2:08:00 PM
Liam Mate!! Outstanding write and most enchanting. The beauty and cosmic purpose shines through absolutely. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 9/16/2015 8:08:00 PM
A dozen very descriptive verses that sing of romance, love and celestial pairings that mankind can only seek to imitate. Great poem my friend! A7
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Date: 9/16/2015 4:51:00 AM
Beauty of cosmic proportions, dear Liam!
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Date: 9/16/2015 4:34:00 AM
- I read your beautiful poem on my mobile phone yesterday evening - Truly a beauty and a pleasure to read - I wish you a wonderful day, dear friend Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2015 5:33:00 PM
This has been a delight to read, Liam! A truly magical and dreamy concoction from which true love is made! // paul
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Date: 9/15/2015 3:30:00 PM
Hi Liam!Another very beautiful,romantic, magical n' captivating love poem, you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling! So very beautifully written!Just awesome!Another very sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it!A most beautiful, dreamy,romantic,sweet enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just wonderful!Excellent.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++! A Fav! To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.I'm so very happy to see you writing, posting again Liam.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very peaceful n' lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 9/15/2015 3:18:00 PM
Enchanting and Magical such words!!! Charma
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