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Breathless

Caught in lust's whirlpool - pretzel entwined limbs edge me into your carnal cavity whilst you taste thine's flesh. Nail-induced scars tattoo my back as wanton yips pervade night air. Erotic stimuli mingle and sculpt our torso's whole!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/4/2010 1:23:00 PM
wow bro, nice one! ;)
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Date: 10/4/2010 10:35:00 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today John. It is so nice to see a post by you today always a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 11:13:00 AM
John, passionate write and so aptly titled as well ~ Enjoyed this loads ;)
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:58:00 AM
Wow, this a late night cable movie!!! heated
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:39:00 AM
Very passionate write, John
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