06/08/2026
2026-06-BREATHLESS-02
Second Place
Contest by Constance La Fronce
As you voiced three syllables, sufficiently capable to reach me seven heavens at once, making my heartbeats to dance and prance ! Rapid pulsation rippling on crest of passion: First verbal interaction from silent admiration. Eternal time took pause on emerald emotion. On that auspicious moment my dormant desires achieved fulfilment. I held my breath turning breathless. With best bliss of my life I was blessed. My ardent ardour glowed in glory and grace. Yet sudden separation I had to face at one corner of my path. Meaningless life to drag on earth ! My heartbeats to run as I'm taking breath - being always ready to welcome death.
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