Breathless

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Simple moments, like the wind Whispering through the leaves, content Gifting each soul a taste of love’s song Breathing promises, tenderness Suggestions of the beauty and peace Stirred to life, each touch tracing Grace, the intimacy, the closeness that abides Short verse free style Poetry Contest Sponsored by Lisa YY July 19, 2022 Theme Chosen: Link D 40 words exactly

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John Watt

Date: 8/11/2022 12:49:00 PM

Gina, so lovely how your words reflect the senses of the moment (taste of love’s song, each touch tracing) to describe the simple joy of intimacy and closeness. Very beautifully written, my friend. God bless you this weekend ~ John

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/10/2022 3:52:00 AM

Closeness matters. Beautiful work. Congratulations!