Breathless

An innocent look that never dies
comes to me with bedroom eyes
With a touch of flame
I can't explain,
It makes me crave
again
and again
Words, like chocolate,
my sweet addiction
My heart cries out
for endless affection
Passion burning, such deep desire
I melt in this heat
as flames grow higher
Hot emotion now ablaze
smokey haze
erotic craze
Dry lips, breathless screams
rising from these endless dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/11/2010 11:57:00 AM
A joy to read an oldie by one of my favorite poets Alana. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:59:00 AM
Your words are passion written at best, they arise the moon from her mountian resting bed, the stars they sing as your words ring true, beautiful, as are you. xoxo Rain. p.s. youve been added to my fav poets. truly amazing work.
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:47:00 AM
Wow! Perfection at it's highest moments Mwah. Perfect!
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:32:00 AM
very good. nice work alana
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Date: 11/13/2009 10:56:00 PM
Sultry!!! I like it (LOL)!!!
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Date: 7/21/2009 5:16:00 AM
Scorching hot Alana. I miss your poetry here at the Soup. Hope you will return soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2009 6:52:00 AM
This feels so real that I begin to blush like a virgin voyeurist. A visually compelling poem.
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Date: 1/30/2009 2:36:00 PM
Alana, I thoroughly enjoyed this passionate piece. Extremely provacative and raw. Love it. Donna G.
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Date: 1/22/2009 8:45:00 PM
I really like its flow and how passionate it is and keeps you want to read more!
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Date: 1/22/2009 5:39:00 PM
Great job Alana. I definitly like the style. Always Lisa
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Date: 1/18/2009 10:47:00 AM
Steaming! Excellent as expected. Even leave Jerry Lee "Breathless" (You might be a little young to understand that. Jerry Lee Lewis had a song "Breathless in 58. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 1/17/2009 1:15:00 PM
Excellent write! The passion in this piece is very well expressed. Well said! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/17/2009 11:30:00 AM
Alana this poem is just amazing - Very well written and just the right amount of sultrinesses - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/17/2009 9:47:00 AM
Lannie,,,wow so many creative phrases...beautiful. Laurie
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Date: 1/16/2009 4:15:00 PM
oh girl you did it for me. another piece of candy in my dreams and chocolate in my heart, this piece is truly art. John H. Loving III
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Date: 1/16/2009 11:59:00 AM
Interesting piece--any mention of chocolate is sure to capture the attention of many. I like the interaction of the first and last lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen
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Date: 1/16/2009 9:24:00 AM
Passionate! ...strong emotions so well expressed... BRAVO Alana! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/16/2009 9:11:00 AM
Great poem.. I got lost in your words! :) Love always, Serenity
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Date: 1/16/2009 9:11:00 AM
I had to stand up...shake myself off...and come back to read reading this one again....Very hot. Nice write! Much love, Steve
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Date: 1/16/2009 5:24:00 AM
Ooh la la, the words in this steamed my glasses LOL Love the natural flow and the imagery, well, that's perfect! Excellent write. Michael
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Date: 1/16/2009 4:50:00 AM
Deep seated passion within these words. Well expressed and wow. : ) Love, Shar
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Date: 1/16/2009 4:47:00 AM
Pure fire screaming in this piece. Tasteful passion exploding in words. Loved it!
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