Breathless

An innocent look that never dies
comes to me with bedroom eyes
With a touch of flame
I can't explain,
It makes me crave
again
and again
Words, like chocolate,
my sweet addiction
My heart cries out
for endless affection
Passion burning, such deep desire
I melt in this heat
as flames grow higher
Hot emotion now ablaze
smokey haze
erotic craze
Dry lips, breathless screams
rising from these endless dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 11:57 AM
A joy to read an oldie by one of my favorite poets Alana. Love, Carol
Loveless Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Your words are passion written at best, they arise the moon from her mountian resting bed, the stars they sing as your words ring true, beautiful, as are you. xoxo Rain. p.s. youve been added to my fav poets. truly amazing work.
Sings Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Wow! Perfection at it's highest moments Mwah. Perfect!
Greene Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 10:32 AM
very good. nice work alana
Thepoet Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 10:56 PM
Sultry!!! I like it (LOL)!!!
Brown Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 5:16 AM
Scorching hot Alana. I miss your poetry here at the Soup. Hope you will return soon. Love, Carol
Shango Avatar
March 19, 2009 at 6:52 AM
This feels so real that I begin to blush like a virgin voyeurist. A visually compelling poem.
Golden Avatar
January 30, 2009 at 2:36 PM
Alana, I thoroughly enjoyed this passionate piece. Extremely provacative and raw. Love it. Donna G.
Lee Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 8:45 PM
I really like its flow and how passionate it is and keeps you want to read more!
Mook Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 5:39 PM
Great job Alana. I definitly like the style. Always Lisa
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 18, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Steaming! Excellent as expected. Even leave Jerry Lee "Breathless" (You might be a little young to understand that. Jerry Lee Lewis had a song "Breathless in 58. God Bless. Vince
Gass Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 1:15 PM
Excellent write! The passion in this piece is very well expressed. Well said! Love, Robin
Jordan Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 11:30 AM
Alana this poem is just amazing - Very well written and just the right amount of sultrinesses - God Bless, MJ
Ginn Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 9:47 AM
Lannie,,,wow so many creative phrases...beautiful. Laurie
Loving Iii Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 4:15 PM
oh girl you did it for me. another piece of candy in my dreams and chocolate in my heart, this piece is truly art. John H. Loving III
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January 16, 2009 at 11:59 AM
Interesting piece--any mention of chocolate is sure to capture the attention of many. I like the interaction of the first and last lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen
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January 16, 2009 at 9:24 AM
Passionate! ...strong emotions so well expressed... BRAVO Alana! Best wishes, Keith
Montgomery Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 9:11 AM
Great poem.. I got lost in your words! :) Love always, Serenity
Voorhees Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 9:11 AM
I had to stand up...shake myself off...and come back to read reading this one again....Very hot. Nice write! Much love, Steve
Degenhardt Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 5:24 AM
Ooh la la, the words in this steamed my glasses LOL Love the natural flow and the imagery, well, that's perfect! Excellent write. Michael
Winter Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 4:50 AM
Deep seated passion within these words. Well expressed and wow. : ) Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 4:47 AM
Pure fire screaming in this piece. Tasteful passion exploding in words. Loved it!
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