Breathless

thoughts of you 
arise like this dawn
in blushes of color
i linger in them 
to find warmth
in this chilly air 
both leave me 
breathless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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December 20, 2019 at 2:32 PM
I enjoyed this short but simply a priceless thought that arroused your mind. This is beautiful Sandra. Thanks for sharing
Adams Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 8:31 PM
thank you so much Greg :) hugs
Kiser Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Great brevity there; you hit it!
Adams Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Thank you M.L...i hope you have a wonderful day :) hugs
Cunningham Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Very romantic words Sandra, hope alls well. Tom
Adams Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 9:55 AM
aside from the funeral of a family member yesterday all is wonderful... thank you Tom... hugs :)
Green Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Just as your poetry leaves me breathless. What a beautiful way to start the day. Sigh. Loved this one my friend.
Adams Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 9:32 AM
what a beautiful thing to say Chris...i am touched by your words... thank you my friend... hugs :)
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December 20, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Wow! Sandra, This is so romantic. Your words floated off the page. Well done my friend. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Adams Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Thank you so much Alexis... this came out of nowhere in the frigid air this morning... I hope your day is as wonderful as you my friend :) hugs
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