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Breathing's Important

Some Pythons grow as long as 23 feet
Enough to wrap around 6 people in a Jeep
Panic if you see one
Bloody well run
Gasping for air will leave you white as a sheet

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Lim'Rik Flats

October 18, 2017 at 9:14 AM

I see rattlers in the wild//My reaction is mild//Their attack?//No worse than Jack//the original wild-child. W-RAP ON JAKE THE SNAKE!!! (Saw my first rattlesnake in the wild this summer. They're pretty shy, but I do proceed with caution when roaming the foothills)

Jack Ellison

October 18, 2017 at 9:26 AM

Stay safe... I hear they go for tainted meat!!!! HAVE A SUPER SQUIRMY DAY JJ!!!

Russell Sivey

October 18, 2017 at 7:36 AM

Hey Jackson, Check out my Limerick..."To the Store," it has some naughty things in it!

Jack Ellison

October 18, 2017 at 7:40 AM

Okey dokey!!!

Russell Sivey

October 18, 2017 at 6:23 AM

I would certainly run if I saw a snake of ANY kind, they scare me completely, just like spiders, I hate them! There are people that chase down these Pythons! I've seen videos of these snakes eating dogs of all sizes, scary! Would you like to meet a snake? I thought your poem was quite scary but educational as well! I really enjoyed reading your amazing piece this morning! What a fabulous write, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison

October 18, 2017 at 6:43 AM

Never encountered a live snake... scary!!!