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Breathing Room

No room to breathe Or catch one's breath Words and phrases Once written on pages Just as easily lost A world without borders No judge, no jury Freedom with wings To love oneself completely Clinging to words bound Caught within a dream Reality just in reach Coming up for air Before one drowns Writing on pure emotion True to style and form

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/1/2012 6:03:00 PM
You open up so many possibilities in this lovely verse. The world without borders would be perfection and sadly lives only in the heart of the poet.
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Date: 11/21/2011 1:05:00 PM
this was awesome good job.. cory
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Date: 11/21/2011 12:49:00 PM
* "I Love The Ending Unto This Beautiful Introspections Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Shannon * Viewing Its Reflections Thrice Times * No Time to Breathe * Coming Up for Air * Smiling As Tossing My Brush Unto The Floor * Gazing Upon The Canvas &, Wanting More * Beautiful & Thank You, for The Sweet Visit * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/21/2011 12:27:00 PM
Now this is a joy to read ... inside the soul of a poet... so enjoyed... luv Michael
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