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Breathing In Dreams

By Michael J Falotico

                                         Dreams are inhaled like rings of smoke,
                                                then blown away into the sky.


"What you Will" contest

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Dinda Minardi

June 21, 2011 at 7:05 AM

So true... I love the way you expressed dreams here..

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 20, 2011 at 10:24 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "What You Will"contest Michael. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

May 11, 2011 at 8:38 PM

wow, another gem of yours I had somehow missed.Awesome imagery plus message. congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 11, 2011 at 1:03 PM

Congrats my White Knight on your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. awesome words .. as always luv.. so honored to be sharing this winners list with u luv.. Jersey Girl in beach mode.. tanning..oh!

Robert A. Dufresne

May 11, 2011 at 12:37 PM

Imaginative write, Michael. Excellent win. congrats!

Elaine George

May 11, 2011 at 11:21 AM

Beautiful Crystalline, Michael. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Kash Poet

May 11, 2011 at 10:06 AM

excellent write.Congrats Michael on your 4th place win........

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 8, 2011 at 11:09 AM

No time for my own personal dreaming on this plane .. soon will be landing..oh.. cannot wait..what a flight .. too tired to sleep .. but never too tired to write and say 'hi' luv..

Zzzzz Zzzzz

May 7, 2011 at 2:26 PM

Nicely put. Dreams are ethereal, until we can make them come true.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 7, 2011 at 9:05 AM

To perhaps come true Michael... as dreams do if u think hard and long enough on them.. visualize them into reality.. beautiful words ..if for the contest for Brian..good luck luv.. my W.K. has done it again.. charmed his Jersey Girl..forever and always luv.

Wilma Neels

May 6, 2011 at 10:19 PM

I somehow think as long as they are out there we still can make them become a reality *p just me being silly.. Early in the morning again.. Ok back to this thought provoking write.. I love it Michael, good luck for the contest, love WNN

Carolyn Devonshire

May 6, 2011 at 5:25 PM

Very profound, Michael. I always what became of my dreams. Maybe I can catch them as they blow away. Sorry about the form for my entry. I'll take it down and come up with something else. I'm on some serious meds and not thinking too clearly. Have a wonderful weekend an best wishes in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

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