Gershon Wolf Poet Couplet

Breathing Easy

Breathing easy
  Speaking freely

Walking around
  Head above ground

Eyes take it all in
  Face forms a wide grin

Heart keeps on beating
  No signs of bleeding

Do not take for granted
  What in you God implanted

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Caren Krutsinger June 23, 2022 at 2:38 AM We should not take "anything for granted" because our next minute is not promised.

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 19, 2022 at 10:48 AM So upbeat, positive and happy. Very nice one, Gershon. :) Gershon Wolf June 19, 2022 at 5:38 PM Positivity keeps us pointed in the right direction! :)

Andrea Dietrich June 18, 2022 at 4:22 PM lovely thoughts, Gershon. Greatly enjoyed this one. Gershon Wolf June 18, 2022 at 8:12 PM Appreciated, Andrea. Thanks, Gershon

Bill Baker June 17, 2022 at 4:25 PM Love the couplets, Gershon. Enjoyable read. Thanks, Bill Gershon Wolf June 18, 2022 at 8:12 PM Glad you enjoyed this one, Bill.

Kim Rodrigues June 17, 2022 at 3:35 PM Oh yes! Absolutely! Take nothing for granted! Without heart we are just a pile of dry bones! Gershon Wolf June 18, 2022 at 8:11 PM 100%. 'A pile of dry bones' without a beating heart. Great comparison, Kim.

Michael Tor June 17, 2022 at 2:11 PM So true Gershon, we realize what we had when we loose it. Very insightful... Gershon Wolf June 18, 2022 at 8:11 PM That's right. 'Don't know what you've got 'til it's gone,' as they say...