Breathing Death

As the shivering lips smile 
to the rhythm of blasts 
As eyes sparkle with light 
of emptiness that forever lasts
as hands raise for someone 
to hold ,Those humans look 
upto God and beg just 
as their mere existence shook
My children of Syria Cried
They Watched as humanity died

5th March 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 10:13 PM
Beautiful poem, Nimra. Congrats on your win.
Barden Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 4:56 AM
Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Nimra - all the best to you, my friend! :-)
Scars Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 6:39 AM
sadly beautiful, I agree with Faraz...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Ajmal Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 6:09 AM
You are really right, the condition of people of Syria is really bad, the children,grown ups all are brutally murdered, this is something which can easily be resolved only if other countries intervene but they didn't even care, it s been 8 years since the war started and there s no hope that it will finish anytime sooner,a really beautiful poem with a beautiful message, good luck and thanks for reading my poem
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