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Breathing Death

As the shivering lips smile to the rhythm of blasts As eyes sparkle with light of emptiness that forever lasts as hands raise for someone to hold ,Those humans look upto God and beg just as their mere existence shook My children of Syria Cried They Watched as humanity died 5th March 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/9/2018 10:13:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Nimra. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/30/2018 4:56:00 AM
Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Nimra - all the best to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 3/21/2018 6:39:00 AM
sadly beautiful, I agree with Faraz...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 3/6/2018 6:09:00 AM
You are really right, the condition of people of Syria is really bad, the children,grown ups all are brutally murdered, this is something which can easily be resolved only if other countries intervene but they didn't even care, it s been 8 years since the war started and there s no hope that it will finish anytime sooner,a really beautiful poem with a beautiful message, good luck and thanks for reading my poem
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