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Written: June 26, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ The sun is alive, and all creatures are awake. Even the green leaves seem to be breathing. And the air is crisp, cool, and pure for our sake. Little black and gray birds sit on the bushes, chirping. Their melodies cloy the morning air and sway. As if to say, "Wake up, embrace the day!" The squirrels are ambivalent, demanding nuts. Their playful antics bestow smiles our way with no cuts The earth straight off is alive and restored. With the vibrancy of life pulsating through its core. And out of respect for this day, I will not turn on the TV or listen to what they say. To the horrors that man has brought upon himself. For today, I need what the earth has on the shelf. A golden yellow morning, with dwarf leaves quivering, As fresh air wafts through the house, my soul is glittering. To be present at this moment, To let climb of worries and atonements To feel the warmth of the sun on my skin, And let it cram me with pure joy within.

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Date: 6/29/2023 1:29:00 PM
Gorgeous writing, Sotto! Wow!
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Date: 6/27/2023 10:22:00 PM
A most worthy write dear Sotto, yes Let the navel gazers feed on the dead Mediums stream, i have almost given Up on who will, open their ears and Then..The hard part their minds ! Their world is not for us Who in God Should Trust '
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Date: 6/27/2023 12:55:00 PM
I dearly love this superb description of Nature’s morningshowcase! Applause ans cheers! Big hugs too! May the Muse be with you…. sally
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Joe Maverick
Date: 6/27/2023 10:22:00 PM
Well put Sally!
Date: 6/27/2023 12:28:00 PM
This in itself is a tribute to nature, Sotto. Unfortunately her gifts are not always appreciated enough and go unnoticed by many. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/27/2023 6:30:00 AM
The beauty and wonder of the day filled with uplifting enthusiasm. For today bury the horror and delight in the joy of today. Oh how I love this happy joyous trubute to a wondeful day. Superb writing my firiend as always I marvel at your talent.
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Date: 6/27/2023 6:23:00 AM
Dear Sotto, A positive and passionate poetic penning here in this tribute to our pulsating planet. Enjoyed
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Date: 6/26/2023 10:52:00 PM
A lovely poem about nature. Well written.
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Date: 6/26/2023 7:46:00 PM
Get off the news. Spend time in the garden of eden. And be thankful of what God can do.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 6/27/2023 10:24:00 PM
Everything we just don't look or Expect enough often John '
Date: 6/26/2023 7:22:00 PM
I too am filled with joy reading this lovely poem early this morn. After a series of dull rainy days, today the sun shines so bright. Like you, I too don't want to be distracted by anything else, but be enfolded in the sweet magic of nature. Simply lovely, dear Lasaad.
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