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Georgia Kereopa

Breathe You In

ravenous desire
pheromones crowning glory...
taste sweet ecstacy

Entered in Contest, Senryu about "Greed, Lust or Loss"
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Placed 3rd

Copyright © Georgia Kereopa | Year Posted 2019

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July 30, 2019 at 1:22 PM

Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..

Georgia Kereopa

July 31, 2019 at 4:25 AM

thank you Funom for reading my haiku and your wonderful feedback

July 17, 2019 at 12:35 PM

Definitely a poetic reference to lusty desires, Georgia! ~ Congratulations on your deserved win. Regards // paul

Georgia Kereopa

July 18, 2019 at 6:48 PM

thank you Paul

Andrea Dietrich

July 16, 2019 at 6:12 PM

back with my congrats on your well deserved win, Georgia.

Georgia Kereopa

July 16, 2019 at 10:58 PM

thanks Andrea and congrats with yours

July 16, 2019 at 1:07 PM

Nicely done, Georgia! Congratulations!

Georgia Kereopa

July 16, 2019 at 10:58 PM

thanks Kim

July 16, 2019 at 8:25 AM

Hey, I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice

Georgia Kereopa

July 16, 2019 at 10:58 PM

thanks so much Janice

July 16, 2019 at 12:19 AM

Yes, this says it all...Congrats on your win!

Georgia Kereopa

July 16, 2019 at 10:57 PM

thanks Jeanne

July 15, 2019 at 6:55 PM

Georgia, congratulations on your winning placement with your catchy senryu!

Georgia Kereopa

July 16, 2019 at 1:44 AM

thank you Tania

Andrea Dietrich

July 14, 2019 at 2:03 PM

Yours was a unique take on those themes. Great job, Georgia.

Georgia Kereopa

July 16, 2019 at 1:43 AM

thank you Andrea

Georgia Kereopa

July 13, 2019 at 7:11 PM

hehe thanks Richard. If a clown farts does it smell funny? You make me giggle.

Richard Lamoureux

July 13, 2019 at 9:28 AM

If you breathe in the wrong person, does that mean you have bad breath? Good luck in the contest! ;0)

July 13, 2019 at 7:59 AM

Great contest entry, Georgia! Janice

Georgia Kereopa

July 13, 2019 at 8:34 AM

thank you Janice

July 13, 2019 at 7:00 AM

A mini death for sure... ravenously strong message

Georgia Kereopa

July 13, 2019 at 8:34 AM

hehehe thank you

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