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Breathe You In

ravenous desire pheromones crowning glory... taste sweet ecstacy Entered in Contest, Senryu about "Greed, Lust or Loss" Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Placed 3rd

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/30/2019 1:22:00 PM

Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/31/2019 4:25:00 AM

thank you Funom for reading my haiku and your wonderful feedback

Paul Callus

Date: 7/17/2019 12:35:00 PM

Definitely a poetic reference to lusty desires, Georgia! ~ Congratulations on your deserved win. Regards // paul

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/18/2019 6:48:00 PM

thank you Paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2019 6:12:00 PM

back with my congrats on your well deserved win, Georgia.

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/16/2019 10:58:00 PM

thanks Andrea and congrats with yours

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/16/2019 1:07:00 PM

Nicely done, Georgia! Congratulations!

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/16/2019 10:58:00 PM

thanks Kim

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/16/2019 8:25:00 AM

Hey, I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/16/2019 10:58:00 PM

thanks so much Janice

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/16/2019 12:19:00 AM

Yes, this says it all...Congrats on your win!

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/16/2019 10:57:00 PM

thanks Jeanne

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/15/2019 6:55:00 PM

Georgia, congratulations on your winning placement with your catchy senryu!

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/16/2019 1:44:00 AM

thank you Tania

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2019 2:03:00 PM

Yours was a unique take on those themes. Great job, Georgia.

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/16/2019 1:43:00 AM

thank you Andrea

Georgia Kereopa

Date: 7/13/2019 7:11:00 PM

hehe thanks Richard. If a clown farts does it smell funny? You make me giggle.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/13/2019 9:28:00 AM

If you breathe in the wrong person, does that mean you have bad breath? Good luck in the contest! ;0)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/13/2019 7:59:00 AM

Great contest entry, Georgia! Janice

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/13/2019 8:34:00 AM

thank you Janice

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/13/2019 7:00:00 AM

A mini death for sure... ravenously strong message

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/13/2019 8:34:00 AM

hehehe thank you